What a journey it has been! cosmochick222: Half the world's sleeping
half the world's awake
half can hear their hearts beat
half just hear them break
I am but a traveller in most every way
i have been through sorrow
i have been through bliss
where i'll be tomorrow
i can only guess
through the darkest desert
through the deepest snow
forward, always forward, i go
catching every drop of water in my empty cup
what a journey it has been
and the end is not in sight
but the stars are out tonight
and they're bound to guide my way
when they're shining on my life
i can see a better day
i won't let the darkness in 8)
what a journey it has been!
Re:What a journey it has been! teacherwriterguy: There's a lot to like in this one - a nice little sense of rhythm that keeps it moving along and moving forward as you seem to be!
First stanza is my favorite - very unified and the final line fits both the rhyme and the feel - just feels "right".
twg
