Daybreak
.

Daybreak lostboy: sirens call

through stillborn air

on shallow distant  wind

my mind is fixed

and buried there

with in those words again

my hearts own voice

though muffled,

screams

through  flesh

and solid bone

recalling as the mourning comes

again



I

am

alone

Re: Daybreak ColoHill: THAT IS SOOOOOOOOOOOO GOOD!!!

However, I must say that I am sorry you are experiencing the pain that has caused you to write it. 


Re: Daybreak unhappy: i can relate
Re: Daybreak lostboy: Thank you both,

I wrote it just before I went to sleep the other night.
Bad day..

I'm glad some one can relate though, I honestly wasn't expecting a response at all I just needed to get out my feelings and put them into some tanigible form.

Lostboy
Re: Daybreak jadedangel: [quote author=lostboy link=topic=18539.msg166985#msg166985 date=1126661567">
I honestly wasn't expecting a response at all I just needed to get out my feelings and put them into some tanigible form.

Lostboy
[/quote">

[color=navy"> Sometimes a tangible form .... speaks volumes to those who read them..

Nice job --- [/color">

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