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Re: HELP!! Crystal_Blue_024: I think it looks great! It's not that basic "___ years old, seeking ____." It's fun and unique! Looks great! Good luck!
Re: HELP!! Plucky: [quote"> it looks good, but some women might find it "Too good to be true". I mean who doesnt want that man...? but to some of us it seems like a romance novel that isn't real.. or never can become real. But over all it looks great![/quote">

I'm with EQ here. It reads a bit like an infomercial. I personally wouldn't respond but I bet you get tons of responses from less cynical chicks than I! Good luck. :)

Re: HELP!! So_Lost: [quote author=Plucky link=topic=33589.msg347966#msg347966 date=1156431580">
[quote"> it looks good, but some women might find it "Too good to be true". I mean who doesnt want that man...? but to some of us it seems like a romance novel that isn't real.. or never can become real. But over all it looks great![/quote">

I'm with EQ here. It reads a bit like an infomercial. I personally wouldn't respond but I bet you get tons of responses from less cynical chicks than I! Good luck. :)
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Ok so then what would you change to make it seem less "infomercially"

Re: HELP!! Plucky: I wouldn't change it at all if that's who you really are. You will get tons of responses, I am sure! There will just be women who will think it's too good to be true (to quote the great EQ).

Re: HELP!! superwife: [quote author=Plucky link=topic=33589.msg347966#msg347966 date=1156431580">
I'm with EQ here. It reads a bit like an infomercial. I personally wouldn't respond but I bet you get tons of responses from less cynical chicks than I! Good luck. :)
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You will get responses, no doubt. I don't know if I would respond, I tend to wait for them to come to me :D (less chance of disappointment). But I'm kinda with Plucky on the cynical thing. And yeah, too good to be true comes to mind. I am not saying you are full of sh*t by any means, but people can write a bunch of crap. Some people subscribe to the 'less is more' theory.

The spoiling of the woman line is a bit much, IMO. I'd leave that out, until you find that woman, and then show her you will spoil them. You may end up with a lot of high-maintenance chicks on your hands.

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